More research that needs to be done for lying flatt (End of book one, and much of book two)

 Remember reserch? Right, well now much of the story stuff is being worked out in the revisons...

Well when I finish revisons (as part of a stage of my final sunday workshops -beta workshops) 

Evryobe in the worshop meant to kind of gage genral audinces and give feedback even if they will not be a sample of my audince demoprhaic likeley-if my book is mainstream enough it will not matter likley, feedback from gernal readers, (and in this case fellow writres even more vauble) is feedback. On some of the most diffuclt to right -newly writtn -recent scnes (only two but next week the roxy one what they say to change or keep the same or genral opnions should be really illumnating on that)

Things to read for book two to fill in the scenes where he's in the punk scene/CGBS in new york (who are his contepriares /conpanatistion: 1988-1990s

11 LGBTQIA+ punk musicians who changed the genre forever (altpress.com)

Eighties New York Hardcore Photos: CroMags, Bad Brains, Agnostic Front (rollingstone.com) 

his rise in the "hardcore scene" at cgbgs (get the terms right, the genres, the bands, the 80s the feel, his sorroundings the attustites -it all so evrthing he does and is (being really openly gay -in that scnee actully isnt that crazy -trying to merge 70's glam with hardcore leather-gay subculture-punk eethestics, to make his own, ending up making "Church punk" to a transgressive relclaming of christain relgious music/idmaity -but punk "jesus was a punk" but also being like a pro gay-just pro shock provocator on the side of being a punk -and a growing charchter in that scene (outside of the scene ) Learning more about the real subctltures will infuence -book two-and how it will go becuase an imporant plot ploint in book two orgnailly is that he is unquinlly transgressive in some way in the scene -but I have to reserch the scene to make sure that still is cultrally relavant -