Friday, March 15, 2024

Writers rock workshop 5 New workshop today with amy (checklist)

  To Do list of revisions to write before tomorrow based on feedback I've gotten this week before/after my workshop tomorrow : 

(this whole week)

1. Rewrite post battle of the bands heartbreak breakdown scene in the car with Kevin

2. Rewrite the second half of battle of the Bands scenes 

                New Order of events: (for pacing in the climax)

                1. Get to battle of the bands, /set the scene with all the bands backstage /Trent punches Rasist band (Tren punches Rasist band), montage of the first few bands to make fun of them.

                2. Lester tries to find Rubin in his dressing room to wish him good luck and ask him what song he's gonna preform, but he can't and it's made clear everyone assumes he's gonna win Trent remains him to watch out, hopes he didn't do what he thinks he did.

    3. second to Last performance of the night, Rubin's big beyrayl, /prefomce its of   lesters song, 

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