First Half of June revisions to add:
First week of June LF revisions to write:
June 5th: Wednesday
Write Hitchkiker Scene.
June 6th: Thursday
Write CBGB'S/ Peachy introduction Scene:
June 8th: Saturday
Battle of the Bands tryouts scene:
June 9th: Sunday (Rework/Update Chili papers concert scene)
3. Shorten the car ride with Kevin on the way /all scenes with hippies
4. Make the scene while watching Flea less about Rubin though they should mention moving on once, on the road, make that scene (no dilouge between Kevin and lester -make it shift, all about Lester worshiping Flea in the moship as his love/life focus completely reshfts towards flea his idol worship and romantic, sexual yunring for him feeling like he knows him after all his years of listening to his music, his story, and stalking him despite being a country apart, - so rewrite the scene to be about that)
1. Putting Earthworms scene after chili peppers scene: after Lester gets/decided to take Roadie job/become Mack Lasher totally ditching who he is, and creating a whole character, a very famous rock star one he assumes Flea would want to party with- on the spot, to Kevin's sadness but understanding informing much of his pep talk in their final flat earther scene.
Lying Flatt all CUT SCENES: Battle of the bands backstage //(Cut Scenes) - Google Docs
2. Rewrite chili peppers backstage interaction: Change earlier car scene with Kevin (no VIP radio win) he talks of doing "Whatever it takes to meet flea" - proceeding to break in at the last minute to meet them backstage and impressing Flea so much with his chili ppers knowledge he gets offered a Roaide job.
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