Shorter revision Goals

 Eli, man, you remember what they said at that austsim group, about Goals? 

You, just, want to achieve a goal? You break it into chunks, smaller goals to better achieve the bigger one, block out all the noise, don't just say you are and really let their nonsense get to you, really don't doubt yourself, you know what you gotta do, so, do it. You have always had what it takes.

So Amy helped a lot, you have a lot of revisions Back Logged, now all you need to do, is write them: 

revision cluster deadline (MAY 17th):

Scenes to add:

1. Roxy's scene Queercore/Leather/Punk mentoring scene in Her room.

2. Lester goes to CBGBS for the first time, tries to save/befriends Peachy, (who comes back in book 2) and upstages Dimond and Gods bastard as Mack Lasher (lies a lot about being famous but questions it )

3. Finish Battle of the bands FINAL revsion touches: rewriting battle of the bands rubin winning, deleting extra banter, Rubin Winning scene, re write post battle of the bands breakdown with Lester and Kevin in Kevins car

4. Add Earthwrorms scene after Chili Papers concert, 

5. Make Lester break into the Chili papers concert backstage and prove himself as a roadie with Flea trivia, and loyalty instead of winning the VIP pass on the radio like now.  

6. First battle of the bands try out (where they surprisingly impress and intimate Rubin and the judges)

7. First Camlot records scene where Lester defends and gushes about the red hot chili peppers, especially Flea /establishes the other bands, music geeks don't respect him or take him seriously at all.

6. Shorten the following scenes along the way:

            1. Car ride on the way to chilis concert 

            2. First and last flatt earth hill scene will Kevin, (kev only needs to give lester flag, not song save song for later, make both less cheasy make Kev give less pep talks and be less repetitive)

            3. Shorten other scenes.